Earth’s Keeper Of The Sacred Breath Of Life
Who knows the ocean’s vastness and its depth
And gathers wisdom diving through abyss
With leaps he celebrates his newfound strength
Vibrations race through space with speed of Light
Restore the rhythm where confusion reigns
Communicate through patterns, waves and sound
Break limits of dimensions once confined
Inhale the Life-Force, feel Great Spirit’s Grace
Recharge yourself with Manna–Prana–Qi
Repairing organs, atoms, blood and cells
Emotions get released through exhaled breath
Now riding waves of laughter, spreading joy
Connect with Dreamtime’s ever-guiding Light
Intuition’s sonar ready to perceive
Feel Wholeness in the Ever-Living One
Author notes
the essential message of Dolphin-Spirit-Guide, dedicated with love to paul aka Cyberartist http://allpoetry.com/Cyberartist - the amazing artist-soul who gifted me with this stunning dolphin-morph-graphic-animation ...
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Thats kind of you I have had the pleasure of swimming with these wise old creatures and the feeling was amazing. A wonderful tribute to the kings of ocean...
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Well, me dear Dolphin-hearded sister,
You certainly have penned one heck of a tribute to one of the greatest and most graceful creatures to swim the seas of this world. I would not doubt that the Dolphins everywhere are jumping and flipping with glee over these fine words you have etched upon this page in their honor. Bravo! Thank you for entering and good luck!
Blessings
Bel
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dear bel,
thank you so much for the gift of a green trophy for the poem in honor of my favorite of all the spirit-guides who are gracing me with their guidance ...
marion
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Dear Sis,
Just like you, I love dolphins too! And this is a beautiful poem on this beautiful creature. Wonderful rhyme, rhythm, assonance and flow here. Lovely use of meter too. I loved the line with Manna-Prana-Qi! So full of energy The starting line is GORGEOUS!!! I just wish I had written that My favourite stanza is the last one. Dolphins are magical creatures and I adore them. You can tell from all the dolphin windchimes I brought back from Florida in 2004 They inspire me to think creatively, help me move freely/flexibly, are full of intelligence and lift me with grace out of a stuck mental condition. It is wonderful how the dolphin can teach a man and woman to learn to resonate first with themselves, take a deep breath and thank each cell within themselves for precious life, recognise their own inner rhythms and then rediscover happiness in life. I think no home is complete without dolphins and dogs
All the best,
Charishma
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thank you so much, dear chari, for a truly inspiring, uplifting, empowering and creative comment !!!
I had been thinking of you for this contest, but saw that your spirit-guide had already been adopted ...
so I was consulting my medicine cards, and since you seem to resonate so much with the totem-animals, I just asked them innocently, about which animal-spirit-guide charishma ramchandani should write about, should she choose to participate in this contest ... and the answer was : THE SWAN !
I have no idea, if swan is an option or if it is still available, but swan does certainly have a message for you ...
I immediately thought of goddess saraswati ... who inspires wisdom and learning ...
well, who knows, if you don't write a swan-poem, I might as well do it in tribute to you ... either way, swan will bestow her blessings upon you, graceful lady ...
mari
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Great tribute to the dolphins
You have written well for the dolphin, who is the joy of the oceans. We humans could learn much from our dolphin friends.
Buddy
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yes, dolphin-spirit is the keeper of the sacred breath ... teaching us to find our inner rhythm and rediscover the joy that dwells within our hearts ...
thank you so much for resonating with dolphin,
marion
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Awwww I'll wait!
I'm a dolphin freak, they're all over the flat, we have to swim around. No really, they're flippers everywhere. I even have a dolphin tatoo on my arm.
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thank you for your patience, georgia ... here's the poem ... enjoy ...
marion
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