Oh Eternal bird
Hast hou endless life
Why dost thou have thy Eternal life
Oh Eternal man
Hast thou thy first friend
Hast thou found someone to love and cherish
Eternal Bird And Eternal Man
Coupled Togther like
Lovers nest in a
Robins Red Breast
Findeth now your eternal soul
For it will be thy light
Eternal man and Eternal bird
Love Each with Heavens might
Author notes
THis was inspired by Picture number four the best on on there
A contest entry
- Picture Inspiration........... by Lyre-Bird-.
530 points, ended March 9, 2007, 23 entries
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Tracey -
"Eternal Bird And Eternal Man
Coupled Togther like
Lovers nest in a
Robins Red Breast
Findeth now your eternal soul"
It was different to read a poem written in old english, I think that is what it is called.
It added depth for me. This was already a very beautiful, thoughtful poem.
very good job with this.
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this was a damn fine piece of writing , if i may be so bold. excellent.
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Yes, which picture was your inspiation for this?
Wendy
Thank you for your entry!
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please put in author notes which picture number used
Thank you
Tracey
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