You'd never chug a syrup flask
or swig a pail of butter
And throwing back ten hot sauce shots
puts stomachs in a flutter
Who gets a keg of ketchup?
or spikes a glass of juice?
And surely nobody
thinks fish spice makes them loose.
Rum causes a man to drink and drive
if it had been relish he'd still be alive.
Author notes
no notes, I personally liked the images, kind of sloppy but liked them
A contest entry
- Alcohol by Lj-.
400 points, ended February 25, 2007, 27 entries
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This is cool. I like all the comparisons.
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