Every morning,
As the sun rises high,
I thank up to the heaven,
That you are alive.
Every morning,
As the coffee brews strong,
I think back the hours,
When you sang me that song.
Every morning,
As my feet hit the path,
I think about you,
As I pass where we sat.
Every morning,
As the water burns my skin,
I think about us,
And the ride life has been.
Every morning,
As I drive in my car,
I think of the times,
That we spent in that bar.
Every morning,
As life carries on,
I'm glad you're here with me,
Like you have all along.
Author notes
Option 2
i wrote this for my gregory. Although it may seem like it, we aren't romantically involved. We're too close to be romantically involved. I call him my Greg because there is nothing to describe the relationship we have. we have passed the point of friendship, but we are not a couple. to call us a couple is degrading to the relationship that we have. we have a strange, but strong connection. we just click.
This poem is about my best friend Gregory, who has helped me battle with severe depression, and the fact that he has stuck by me through all time makes him so special to me.
A contest entry
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sweet
I'm glad you have a friend that is so dear to you. Nice poem and thanks for entering. *finalist* -
i loved this entry.. i was actually going to add it to my finalist, but i'm not one to support a poem in two contest... i'm sorry =| thank you for entering and good luck in the other contest!
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Very good....
..... Excellent poem and wonderful dedication.
I really liked this part of your poem:
Every morning,
As I drive in my car,
I think of the times,
That we spent in that bar.
Every morning,
As life carries on,
I'm glad you're here with me,
Like you have all along.
Excellent poem. Thanks for entering the contest and the best of luck to you. Kassie -
Knowing that they are there for you, anytime, for any thing, is what makes a friend a good friend.
You did a great job of describing how having that friend feels to you.
good job with this and good luck in the contest. -
aww, a sweet write! take care, sam(dreams27) xx
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