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Blood on a Rose.

It lies on the ground, discarded,
A deep red rose, perfect in every way.
Yet there is a mark on its petal,
One drop of blood spilt by its thorn.

Beside the rose lies a lace hanky.
Perfectly embroidered in every way.
It is stained with a tear,
Shed by a breaking heart.

In the dimming light of day,
The sun leaves a glow so perfect.
As the rose and the hanky in shadow lie,
No more will they be held in loves sweet hand.

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  • shysky
    March 11, 2007
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    Bitten

    Having been biten by a rose one knows the sweetness of the pain caused by something so beautiful.


  • Smokey Minx
    February 28, 2007
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    Well Done!

    Well done scribs.. keep it up.


  • cute mayoush
    February 26, 2007
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    awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee