Hello, Jesse;
This is me now,
It's too late to know what might have been,
But I hope you know you're still my best friend.
Two years ago,
We were together,
We were young,
And in love,
Staying out all night,
And sneaking in at dawn.
~chorus~
Yeah, you drive me crazy,
Sometimes I wish you were here with me,
But then I remember,
That you're gone forever,
But I still lie awake,
Thinking of you,
Jesse, do you miss me too?
~*~
There you are,
Standing there,
Beside a girl with long, blonde hair;
And you look at her the way you used to look at me,
You must love her, Jesse;
But what I would give for you to look at me that way,
Jesse, there's just one more thing to say.
~chorus~
Yeah, you drive me crazy,
Sometimes I wish you were here with me,
But then I remember,
That you're gone forever,
But I still lie awake,
Thinking of you,
Jesse, do you miss me too?
~*~
Hello, Jesse,
I love you.
Author notes
8.Write whatever you wish.
A contest entry
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1150 points, ended March 23, 2007, 24 entries
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awe
amazing and breath taking and lovely and sad and OMG! This poem was really good I enjoyed the topic and the layout of the poem it made me want to sing it! Great song..I could really feel the emotions of this write! If I were to grade this I would give it a 93...because no bodys perfect but you were pretty close. -
GREAT JOB
AWWWW this is SOOOOOOOOOO GOOOOOOOOOOOOD!!!!!!!!! i almost cried! i love it! its fillled with emotion and beautifully wriiten
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