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Breaking waves, sinking ships, still afloat your empty core

Unrequitted waves reach forever upon your shores
I was vying for your laughter,
but caught your heart instead.
sand gives way beneath my feet
Your unsteady shores keep me stumbling

Sugar, sail sweetly over my untroubled waters
Realization that we are not all stormy seas
my buried treasue is marked clearly with an X
I try not to be a mystery for you

But to discover your hidden secrets
Id have to travel scores of lenghts
just to find it buried beneath the waves

Baby, bound beneath deck
is where your best thoughts will come
Cleared heads float better than weighted minds

If ever found you feel you may drown
Just send me your silent plea
Honey...


I'll grab your hand


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uummm, I dont really know...

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  • --Beautiful--
    February 28, 2007
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    This is good...i'm not sure what to think of it...i'm still in a strange mood. At first it seemed alittle un-put together but i'm not sure if i still feel that way. Good write though. Thank you for entering my contest and good luck!