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God Made Flesh

                God Made Flesh for us to live
                  In our dreaming sillhuette
                  Like an Eagle Soaring high
                  I will always forget you nigh

                  God Made Flesh for us to Breathe
                  In Our singing of Harmony
                  Like The Voice of a shy deer
                  I will always conquer my fear

                  God made Flesh for Us to see
                  The wonders of our living being
                  Like the Meadows of a dream
                  There always comes a roaring stream

                  God made Flesh for Us to hear
                  the loving words that angels sing
                  Like the head of an arrow
                  I will always be there as fast as a sparrow

                  God made Flesh for us to touch
                  the belongings of our lives of long ago
                  Like a whsper in my ear
                  your words are only mine to hear

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  • gaerielle
    February 23, 2007

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    Distinctive

    This is very well written!! Every word has a lot of greatness woven between each other! I love when you start every paragraph with God made Flesh, very clever thought! It echoes kinda worship hymns of the Bible There is a flavor of mystical holiness and experiences. A foundation for christian growth and and beliefs in the grace of God. Blessings xx


  • Froggy09
    February 23, 2007
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    Very moving

    This has a meaning and i think the meaning is that we must cherish your life if not i dont know