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prisoner

how could you do this...
do this to me
you left me in shadows....
for the world to see
and now i'm your prisoner...
trapped inside hell
and you could careless.....
but that we could tell
you said that you loved me...
but you lied deep within
you left me in shadows.....
for me to just sin
and now that i'm hopeless....
you take it from me
saying i'm your prisoner.....
and you won't let me free

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  • Tears from within
    March 3, 2007
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    I forgot to click on the applauds sorry lol.


  • Tears from within
    March 3, 2007

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    Wow

    Im not sure which one of you wrote this but it is wonderful. I really like it. This is beautifully penned! Wonderful flow. Once again another great write. Keep up the great work.