the last day to live,so much do and say
people to meet,people to say my farewells
to spend it in japan waisting away the hours
with my friends and family,meeting my favorite manga artists
and reading away the day,i feel content that i know when it all ends
it will not be painful or devastating to dye in peace makes me content
i lived my life at the full with many regrets,mistakes and friends
all thats now important to me is that I'm alone when i die for no one to be there
so they don't watch me die,to sleep through the night and not wake up
my secrets lay hidden with my life of friends and foes who know all of me
but would never tell,but there are secrets that still lay hidden..........
Author notes
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A contest entry
- 24 Hours To Live by The Order of Chaos.
650 points, ended March 20, 2007, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Very nice...I loved the way you told this story of your last day..It's kind of sad to think about..But you made it not so sad at all..Good luck in the contest...
Dusty -
CONGRATSSS!!! you finally got something on!!
It also really good too
Keep writing
Lemonhead
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Okay
I tried to kill myself by overdose so i understand the whole concept of falling asleep and not waking up. good poem.
-AkaBaki
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