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Pinned Where I Lie

And I see the sun
          I lie here laughing
                  'Cause your day will come!
And I bleed my blood
          I burn to ashes
                    And sever all love!

Stuck where I am
Pinned where I lie
(How) Can you leave me
Leave ... me to die?

And I see the sun
          I lie here laughing
                  'Cause your day will come!
And I bleed my blood
          I burn to ashes
                    And sever all love!

Sliced by the same
Blade in my mind
That holds me here
Pinned ... where I lie!

And I see the sun
          I lie here laughing
                  'Cause your day will come!
And I bleed my blood
          I burn to ashes
                    And sever all love!

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  • Dreams27
    February 24, 2007
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    a sad yet well written poem, nice layout though, take care, sam(dreams27) xx