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Around her body my glances spring up with green hopes
The serenity autumns her fall coloured attire
The desires seduce all the chances in winter wraps
Our unity alone rains wonders in lovely dark chambers
The dried leaves chat with me about fall of many colours
The accumulated snow inches ahead my solid desires
The drops of rain thunder me with shocking memories of honey moon
The winter clinches its cold harvest in minutes of shiver and shower
Let the mountainous ranges bless me with power
let the strings of desires bind with the blooming buds
let the aesthetic world term me as a maniac of confluence
Yet let the breezes from the clouds shower me with courage and resistance
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A contest entry
- OPTIONS FOR EVERYONE!!! by NooNiThEWitcH.
425 points, ended March 8, 2007, 28 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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it is very beautiful.. thank you for sharing
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please!
delete the other two please1 -
'LL SUBMIT AFRESH IF NEED BE
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SORRY
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ok, please tell me which option you chose, and can you please delete the other two. Coz you entered your poem THREE Times, I will be back again, don't worry this is not my 'real' comment, but just my quick one.
And rule number 8 states that no poem should be shorter than '10' lines, sorry
Nooni
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