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Last Day

Ever since childhood
You are told to live every day like it is your last
But how can you know what that's like
Until it is

I ponder my life
and whether or not
It was worth living
I hope it was

I think about God
The thought soothes me
Heaven will be welcome after this purgatory
I'll see my mom again

I visit friends and family
Apologizing for all wrongs
We cry together for a bit
Until we are beyond tears

I pray until I can't bear it
Just a few hours left
I never did write my autobiography
But it seems pointless to start now

As the time comes nearer
I clear my head of all thoughts
And dwell on feelings such as love, joy, hope
Then finally
My wait is at an end
I move on towards the angels heralding death
With peace

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  • MidnightButterfly
    February 23, 2007
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