What don't I possess that once surely I did?
The face that I loved from my eyes is now hid.
I assay to retain what my senses crave;
The essence of one, my aloneness to stave.
Ethereal touches that tease and seduce me in twilight dreams,
though elusive they must be.
All purpose and reason have consumed away, yet...
Love still lives here; it's last lingering ray.
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There is not much giving up in this, optimism through and through, you don't give up do you? Way to Go!!!!!
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Thanks.
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This lovely Marg it exsplains how you feel and how you still hold your Love for someone.What don't I possess once surely i did?Something I had for my eyes is now hid. Ilike these first two lines.Keep writng Marg.
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lovely write...good imagery and flow...the last 2 lines were my favorite...thanks for entering and good luck in the contest
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Thanks, aliceramone for commenting. I haven't written in awhile so it took awhile to get this one on paper.
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