I walked into his arms,
the beauty of his glamour
held me in its wake.
There was no escape,
no refusal of this waltz.
Mesmerised under the glow
of the full moon,
I could not turn back.
As he swept me up,
I felt a chill race
up my spine, dread filled
my aching heart.
I wanted this, needed this,
but now terror caused
the bile to rise up
into my throat.
On and on the dance
never stopping or
even pausing for breath.
His hellish eyes burning
like coals of fire.
He lifted me upon his
waist, tearing my gown
to ribbons, and thrusts
his hard length
into my maiden body.
I screamed with pain,
as the cold night
chilled the blood
coursing down my thighs.
No escape, I drew faint
with pain, helpless to stop
this macabre dance.
With each pace, each step
he forced himself
deeper inside me.
The pain mixed with pleasure
becoming one in the same.
I felt his hot, sickly sweet
breath on my neck
as he pierced another virgin
territory, drinking of
my life's essence.
Dizzy and disoriented,
he left me there as
dawn approach, broken
and bleeding, barely
alive, and the last
he said to me.
"You will be mine again,
in a year and a day."
Author notes
Written June 22nd, 2003
In a list
A contest entry
- Vampire Erotica by Celticmoon.
250 points, ended June 27, 2003, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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wow totally dark and passionate i love the dark passionate poetry theyre totally sexy and you did a fantastic job of describing exactly what you wanted to reader to see and feel!! bravo! thank you for sharing it with the rest of us i look forward to reading more!
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Very well written, haunting and erotic, the rhythm of the words was excellent. Descriptive and vivid. Excellent work.
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Very dark erotic piece here. Flows very nicely.
Lil
P.S. thanks for the comment
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Oh my! This is enchantingly dark and evocative! It almost makes me desire this demon but angels and demons don't mix well at all. Not the kind of angel I am anyway. LOL Splendid work that held me from onset till ending. My oh my... LOL
Love YOU dear One ♥
Mom
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Ah...I see now...I read the second part a long time ago and missed this first...:) Loved them both!
Hugs..
Mary ann -
I don't know how I missed this.
Excellent write! Such a dark look at the vampire and his trail of blood. So.. has it been a year and a day?
wonderful erotic pulse to this one.
Great job!
Hugs..
Mary Ann -
This was good - didn't use smut to get the message across, vivid imagery, interesting mix of pain and pleasure.
Well written (which I always admire).
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Awesome
Awesome write and once I started to read I could not stop~ Very visual with the imagery and put me in the scene~ Powerful ~Good luck in the contest~ Look forward to more~ Big Hugs~ Desire -
Chilling and erotic don't even do this one justice...you have worked your intense magic again with this one, making it a most enjoyable contest entry write. I wouldln't have known where to begin with this one...makes me hear howling in the distance, the eerie rustle of trees in the graveyard cemetary next door..chilling for sure.......thanks.
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indeed a thrilling hell of a ride here. well done. good luck to you in the contest
Blessed be
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you do seem to have a knack for writingsensual evocative works with that pen of yours... even taking the tired but tried and true "vampiric", though in this case daemon, tales and makeing it feel new, fresh
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those demons are extra horny of course with two on their head and a horn with a nighty head below...cute poem....very seductive....Artis
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Wonderfully chilling and erotic :)Good luck !
Reenir
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Absolutely Amazing!
WOW! This was amazing!! I couldn't even compete on this Excellent work!! The imagery you have in here is awesome! Wow, is all I can say to this! Good luck in the contest 
James
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dark, scary, sensual, erotic!!!!!!! i love this!!!!!!
your description of being taken by a vampire, full of lust, and full of desire, by both, is absolutely incredible!!!!!!
good luck in the contest!!!!!
blessed be
mike
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I thought this would be explain Lust better...it's a prequeal.
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WOW! Definately dark and scary.But definately erotic as well. And I must agree with Angel....makes you wanna hunt don the guy or any man for that matter........lol
Awesome Write!
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A dark sensual vamp write hun
Loved it
Good luck in the contest
Luv ya
Blessed be
Susan~~~~~~
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Ohh scary, I don't wanna meet him in a dark alley! Seems rather
a nasty fellow..
nice job!
Jen
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Awesome
Wow! Some great seductive and descriptive lines. Made me want to go hunt down a vampire LOL, yet fear him at the same time. Not too different from mortal men LMAO Awesome job on this Thanks for sharing...
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Definately descriptive of the dark lure, and the compulsion to leap where sense tells one not to, in the name of passion...and the promise at the end of return... to once again dance the dance until there is nothing left..
Good luck with this one too
~~whims
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