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Mother

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A mothers love is like no other.
She carries you in side of her giving life to you.
She gives you every thing she can
The person who meets your every need.
She the one who takes away your fears.

And the one who kisses away your tears
Her day is spent watching over you
On till another day is through
Even when you are a sleep
In to your bed room she has to peep

Her job is never done she loves her little one.
From the day you are born her life is not her own.
You are the master from the day she brings you home.
You smile at her and it makes her heart so glad.
You cry at her and it makes her world so sad.

Every step you take it makes  her love you more.
The first words that you say to her
are worth riches by the score
Even when you are grown you will never be alone.
Her prayers are with you guiding you

All a long the way each and every day
When you go out on your own
She is always there at the end of a phone
When your in pain she feels it too.
She would walk through fire she would die for you.

And when her life is over your angel she will be
Guiding and protecting on till eternity

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Thinking about my mum and how wonderful she is.
By funkyricky

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  • Talking Toni gold member
    May 17, 2008

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    Quite Lovely!!!!!!!!!!!!

    So sweet to hear a young man speak of his love for his mother the way you have here!!! Just a lovely write!!!Thanks for your entry and the best of luck in the contest!!!~~Toni~~


  • Candy6
    June 2, 2007
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    excellent

    I love this poem. The picture is so beautiful. a great write.


  • MelissahhMidnite
    May 18, 2007
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    lovely
    i love it
    its so admiring, great work


  • Unnamed Feelings
    May 3, 2007

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    aww how lovely! Thank you for entering my contest, sounds like you have a wonderful mother too! Beautiful poem


  • SweetRoses
    April 18, 2007

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    This is such a sweet write. Your mother must mean a lot to you. My mother is a very speacial lady to me. Although I didn't get as many hugs and kisses because she had to work 2 jobs. But that was how she showed she cared. She was a provider and she still is. Mothers are wonderful people and we don't really give them enough credit for all the stuff they have to go through. You are a very special person to write such a wonderful tribute to your mother. I hope that you let her read it.


  • Angel Felice Seals
    March 11, 2007
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    what a great tribute to your mom it makes me dream of a mother so loving and kind this was a great way to show what a true mother really is for thoughs like me that only dream of a mothers love thank you for shareing this with all of us keep it flowing dear poet


  • SilverButterfly gold member
    February 24, 2007

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    What a loving tribute to your Mother! This is so sweet and caring of you. She is blessed to be loved like this.

    GBY
    Silver


  • meanderingbear
    February 23, 2007

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    You certainly must have a wonderful Mom to have written such beautiful words about motherhood! My poems usually rhyme and I like the rhyming that you have done in this poem. Sometimes the lines don't rhyme though, and that throws me off a little. None the less, the poem is a beautiful tribute to your mother.

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