It seems there's nothing left of me,
No heart no soul, no air to breath.
A hollow shell is what I am,
Alone in shadows I shall stand.
Until you break me, pull me to my knees,
Smiling as I beg and plead.
I see the demon the sickness in your eyes,
You hear the screams but ignore as innocence dies.
The world is filled with fear and broken trust,
And my heart becomes brittle and cold as I start to rust.
Trying to recover what the evil once took,
I try to show the world but no one wants to look.
We are their sons and their daughters,
But they continue killing what they've already slaughtered.
Now a stone replaces what used to be,
The world murders another because they refused to see.
We tried to tell the tale, but remain unheard,
Tried to scream it out, but remain ignored.
So we kept living with all the pain locked within,
Living a story of the broken.
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Wow!
I am extremely impressed with this very beautifully penned poem Ms. Tasha. any ways what I really love is the way you worded this poem and the concept to this poem as well. I really got the sense of mind through this poem and it is sad that this happened but this is just an all round great poem. very well penned and keep up the good work
Signed, Paul 
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this is an awesome poem,i loved it,
keep writing
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This is an outstanding write! I hung on every word. My favorite verses are the world is filled with fear and broken trust and we are their sons and daughters. Your very talented and look forward to reading more of your stuff.
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wow very impressive
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great write. everything about it is amazing.
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Wow!!
Everything about this poem was great.
The message
The rhyme
Flow
Everything I loved this..and the word choice as well...Great job..
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This poem really hit home,
Why tell a world that wont listen?
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I love this write. So true. how everyone holds everything in cuz the world doesn't listen. a great write.
~Kitten~
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