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Conscious Memory


Forgotten words that slide in and out of conscious memory,
Sad hues amidst the happy colours,
Sentiment given to feelings that cut so deep
Yet love sits on lips, just waiting, hoping for voice.

Your touch reaches across the void of conscious memory,
Sad inflections hide behind happy smiles,
Loneliness fights against the pain of despair and
Love no longer sits on lips, but is heard by my heart.

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  • penman gold member
    March 26, 2007
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    Excellent

    This has such a marvelous flow and truly captures the mind. Great job.


  • rebel lips
    February 23, 2007
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    wow, beutifull, just beutifull