I love you
Look inside yourself
You know it's true
Share with me
That I desire
To love you more
Take me
Into your arms
Into your heart
I beg of you
One night to remember
Our souls joined forever
I love you
Our stars have crossed
Let them shine bright
A contest entry
- Just Me...And You... by FlipperSwitch.
600 points, ended September 8, 2007, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - ANYTHING SHORT by Blooming Poet.
400 points, ended March 7, 2008, 105 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - star crossed lovers by Cerbie20.
1325 points, ended August 31, 2008, 87 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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very nice, i love it... it was short, but it was sweet, and really good.
I beg of you
One night to remember
Our souls joined forever
that one night can be the best choice in your life, or the biggest mistake, but for love, it is a great risk worth taking... very good job!
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Beautiful love poem.
I love it, thanks for entering. -
I really enjoyed the ending most of all because it really made me smile inside
Thanks for the entry
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well, congratulations on the trophy, and for winning the hand of my Sweet Sister.
now you will have to change one verse in your poem
I beg of you
One night to remember
Our souls joined forever
I beg of you
our souls will join together
when you say yes to me
see, she just did.
take care of her my man. shes priceless.
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From one mike to another
She is in good hands
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This sounds so familiar....yet it feels like new...like a new love waiting to be shared....caressed....and then begged to be repeated...I really loved this! Thanks for entering my contest...good luck! Smiles, Terry
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