As the planet slowly dies
A new hero will be born
Rising from the wreckage
From an earth thats bloodied and torn
This hero will bring joy and hope
Spread life wherever he can
Who is this man of marvels
None other than Natureman!
His touch will bring back happiness
With his awesome healing powers
This Earth return to Eden again
In just a few short hours
The peoples of the Earth will cheer
As they witness what's transpired
Their future now has been assured
Their saviour much admired
A contest entry
- Heroes by flyingphoenix.
550 points, ended March 11, 2007, 7 entries
Gold trophy winner
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Haha this is great, I love the humour and the idea of Natureman is excellent, especially in times when we seem to be destroying more and more natural beauty. Thanks for your great entry, good luck and take care! x
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WOW!!!!!! Now not only do I love this one but I also love the message this has in it!!!!!! You my friend are quite the talented writer!!! Thanks for sharing these and allowing me to use them in the scrapbook for my grandbaby!
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loved it!! Great rhyme, great flow and a great super hero!!
it had quite an 'old skool' super hero feel to it, if that makes sense!! i htink that was protrayed in the last verse especially, where you say 'their saviour much admired' that is very much like the Superman and Justice League. (I'm just waffling!!)
I would like to say sorry it has taken me soo long to comment, i have been so busy recently!
Thank you very much for entering such a great poem!
webber
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Thanks darling girl!
I love nature so it was only 'natural' that my hero would have that kind of theme...If something isnt done soon by the worlds leaders then we might have to hope on someone like this appearing on the scene!...luv n hugs...Dad xxx
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I think I love natureman already, we need some super heroes like this right now, with powers to undo the wrongs we have done to mother earth, if only this person existed... this is brilliant again
Karen
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Fear not!
NatureMan dons his lycra tights once more to save the planet...into the blue!!!!!....Whooooooosh!..lol...couldnt resist that!...luv Dad xx
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YAY !
WOO HOO Go "Natureman". This is a really good poem. I think we all have our own imaginary Superhero. Wouldn't it be great if they were real? Well done and good luck in the contest
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G'day Julie!
My ultimate hero is of course Superman...but hey...my alter ego as Natureman might just come in a close second!...lol!...thanks for commenting...Dan...Up Up and Awayyyyy!...X -
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Go get 'em "Natureman"
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HaHa!
Faster than a speeding hedgehog!...able to leap some plants in a single bound...strong as a mouse on steroids!...its Natureman!..whoooosh...(cape billowing in the breeze...honest!) -
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Drum roll please for Natureman ...and not one moment too soon..we are a planet in trouble an if we dont act will be a planet in crisis then what do we do go look for another planet...well this is not a movie where we can go off world and take over by the time that technology is developed we will be dead...but we all can be heores by doing our little bit ..i dont care for heores because they fall from grace
but dan you say it so well and I admire your talent nicely penned
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great superhero you have chosen.I wish I would have thought along those lines(LOL)Anyway.A great concept for a great hero I would say(love the outfit)
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Super!!!!!!
Dan you would look good in a pair of these tights! lol.
You are on a roll this weather my friend. I have loved al your new work.
This poem is inspiring, especailly for the children of this world, you should give it to the school. i do believe the children would look up to this superhero.
It might help to preserve and take better care of this wilted eden.
Good luck my friend.
Dolores. xx
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Bejaysus Dolores!
I think it would be a truly hideous sight to behold Dolores!...Me in tights!...I'd be arrested for sure...and I'd have to be raving drunk to even wear the things!...Im sure theres a better outfit than that for me...like a postbox maybe!..lol...luv'n'hugs...Dan xxx
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yeah you got me to smile
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Thank you!
Faster than a speeding hedgehog!...able to leap tall borders in a single bound!...is it a bird?...is it a squirrel?...no!...its Natureman!..lol...thanks for the comment...glad it made you grin!...regards Dan xx
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