We’re living in a strange world
The misunderstandings between people
Affect our life and get us down
So will build a world of our own
It fenced in and nobody can enter
No one can see us
Wouldn’t it be wonderful
It’s a secret world of sweetness
Just for you and me
Filled with loveliness
So close your eyes and take my hand
Our own world has our place you see
Wherever I am there is also you
And that’s how it’s meant to be
Then a lasting bond will be secured
Our connection will be true
Spreading love in all over the place
The softness of skin
The sweetness of a kiss
The depth of desire and love
The thrill of a heartbeat
Walking together
We hold a special bond
That no one can tear apart
This world….
It is ours… it is you and it is me
A world of love…of feelings
Of visions…of dreams
Hopes and sorrow
You and I are we
And that we are one
In a world of our own
A contest entry
- Your happy place. by samantha jean.
800 points, ended July 21, 2007, 27 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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FANTASTIC!
well done
A N D G O O D L U C K!!
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excellent~
Very romantic...
Love the beauty you penned in this one...
I entered too do hope you come see me
Best of luck in the contest
Susan~~~
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I can't begin
to tell you how many times I've wished I could regress into my own little world...but...I would be with just myself and my kids... society and the world can be so cold...
beautifully written...
Heidi -
a very beautiful poem indeed, lots of emotions expressed, and lovely ideas. i wish you luck in the contest
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great poem. But sometimes I feel, if you're wrapped up in love that you'll forget about your friends...could just be me though.
Rosita -
Beautiful wisdom,
The softness of skin sounds like how sensitive many people are, and the sweetness of a kiss, are how many makeups are required to acertain clemency for our sins, by no way indicates how difficult it is to gain worldwide completeness, as faiths, creeds and colour backlash, but the formiddable task it has obtaining it, and through poetry, it is always the first indulgement on peace. Lovely work indeed. You should be a proper politician
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This is very good Grace....very, very good. I like the imagination of you in this about a land of love that you have pictured. This is one of your best. Good luck in this contest.
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You certainly are a visionary romantic hey!!.
This is a wonderful romantic and heartfelt piece of poetry you have penned.
I am impressed with the beauty penned.
Well done Grace Well done.
Jeffro -
Beautifully written.
Wow, this is very beautiful and romantic indeed. I'm sorry it's taken me so long to read and comment on your poems, I've been slacking off lately
. Anyways this is amazing, as always your poems are written to the best. Keep up the amazing work, I will be around to read and comment more on your poems so until then take care!
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very beautiful, a very romantic poem, lots of lovely ideas. great write
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