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Passion



"How many girlfriends do you have daddy?" She asked me sheepishly.

"About 5 billion, give or take."

"No! Serious girlfriends."

"Hmmmm. That is something they determine, not me. As far as I know there are two that claim they feel that way about me."

"Which one is number one?"

"Both are number one." I responded. "How can love be better or worse than love?"

"Oh." She said. "How can both be number one?"

"Which one of your eyes is better than the other?"

"Oh, I see!" Her smile gave away that she understood.

"What makes one go from being a girlfriend to a serious girlfriend?"

"Passion."

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  • Goddess of illusion
    February 24, 2007

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    ~ This was Touching ~

    I enjoyed this write, it was touching and the understanding of these words, left me speechless...

    This was truly lovely, Allan...

    Keep on writing with ink that never fade...

    Elmarie


  • 2lullabyhaven
    February 23, 2007

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    Especially Touching

    This one hits home. I've just had to denote a special
    someone...for their lack of passion. This one touched
    me....thanks.


  • delicate innocence
    February 23, 2007
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    beautiful

    Wonderful comparison. Made me smile

  • Amera gold member
    February 23, 2007

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    Oh my! this is a bit personal. It does reflect that life is poetry. It also says that you are human.

    Love, Amera

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