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Turn around for me tonight

 

turn around for me tonight
and tell a silly tale
fill me with awesome delight
don’t leave out any detail

stuck inside this blue black place
with blue waters rippling behind
just the thought fills my soul with grace
so much wonder here combined

jet black hair flows
over blue iridescent skin
sparkling light shows
wonders that lie within

take me in your arms
rescue me form this awesome place
let me show you all the charms
I’m covered with blue lace

turn around for me tonight
and tell a silly tale
fill me with awesome delight
don’t leave out any detail

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  • Random Lily
    February 23, 2007

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    A beautiful descriptive poem, I love it. Absolutely breathtaking. Describes the picture so well. GREAT imagery. Good job and good luck in the contest!


  • lucy sky-diamond
    February 23, 2007

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    a very beautiful poem, lots of lovely description, a write to be proud of. i wish you best of luck in the contest