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[ I wish I were a cello, ]

I wish I were a cello,
So I could play as beautifully as I feel
But also the sadness
Could also appeal
To the higher senses
The greater complexity
The greater toxicity
Of a repeated liability
Leading to repeated gullability
Speaking in my secret language
Too complex to understand
In the hope the one I love,
Will never have to stand

In the shadow,


Of something much darker...



Darker by far...

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  • Dreams27
    February 23, 2007
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    good write! take care, sam (dreams27) xx