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lost in paradise...

so lost in words I become
opening the heart from the bottom
spilling all that was in
like a seductive sin
where will I be the next moment
I know not when and why I comment
But so lost in my mind
I pray you to be not so kind
put me thro' the furnace again
Give me more joys in these pain
I ll not leave this game without my dice
Not to be unseen but lost in paradise

All in this world So do they say
Where there is a will there is a way
And if there were none I will
Lay them all myself and if you still
Have more to give me and make me cry
Come on head on I ask give a try
I ll have the strongest of hope
Brightening all in darkness that grope
So long my death kindly wait your turn
I have things to do oils to burn
I might just run out of time say the wise
But I cannot be lost forever in paradise

Sunny-

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"Come on life give me what ya got"-sunny

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  • Disturbed Prodigy
    February 23, 2007
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    this is something, i mean this is great, you did a great job on this it is amazing keep it flowing


  • Sweetangelgrace
    February 23, 2007

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    two thumbs up!


    Oh, Sunny
    Come out and watch me play
    Come out so your smiles shines through
    Celebrate life
    Celebrate love
    Sing in the sun
    Dance on the rain
    I look forward to seeing you
    You found an angel
    When you really needed one
    Youll be in my heart
    As long as there is a sunnystar
    You can't be lost in paradise
    All you do is simply smile
    And have fun..


    ~~GRACE~~



  • troyias
    February 23, 2007

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    Beautiful

    Well written and a very emotional write, spaking ow loss and gain as though they were one. Great Job sunny.

    *Go with God*

    Valerie