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Chavs

Chavs

The multiplying villainies of nature
Do swarm around the streets
Mocking
Laughing
Drinking
Brutalizing the language they should know well
The insipid caricatures of a society
Unsexed by an uncaring world
And cast aside to fester in the bowls of an “advanced” society
Crumbling beneath our feet
Falling before our eyes
In a stream of drugs
The end is nigh
The end wears Burberry

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  • Disturbed Prodigy
    February 23, 2007

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    this is something, it is interesting and creative in a way, you did agreat job on this keep it flowing


    • chaostheory89
      February 24, 2007
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      thanks personally i think it is a bag of shit but i am my own worst critic


  • moment liver
    February 23, 2007

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    Interesting write Mark. A sense of weary doom. Keep writing from within.

    See you around the deep end
    moment liver