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If you were my mother and I was your daughter

I've never had a mother
and I hope that you will be rather
happy to have just plain old me

Maybe we can just hang out and talk
or go to the beach and walk
but all I really want is a friend

Someone who I can look up to
when I am alone and so blue
Then I'd have someone to go and hug

So, I hope you will be my mother because
then I won't have to pause
anymore of my life

So won't you be this
to me and I'll give you a kiss
but no really, I just need someone

Thank you for your time
I know I'm bad with the rhyme
but hey I tried

For this AP family of yours
and I pray that it will ensure
that I am part of it

Author notes

I would like to be your AP daughter. I think we would have fun with that because for one we are close in age (which of course would not work out in real life if the whole mother/daughter thing were true) but anyway, we would have lots to talk about. So I hope we can be, if not at least friends.
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I do really have a mother but I just had to make something up for your contest so there it was.

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  • InMemoryofCharlieJr
    March 7, 2007
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    AWWW thank you so much. I love hearing comments and keeping in touch with you. Thank you again


  • Spiritvision angel
    March 7, 2007

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    Awe, this is so sweet. truely heartfelt and loving. I love this and would have taken you in a heartbeat.


  • InMemoryofCharlieJr
    February 24, 2007
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    Thanks! I hope so too. Then I'll be related to them somehow, lol. Ok I will do that


  • EliaNinja
    February 23, 2007

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    I would love to have you in my family, luff. I'm hoping every one that enters will, but I especially like your 'rhyme' If ya want, message me anytime

    <3 Elia