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30 second mind blank.

I tell myself,
I won't,
I won't do that again,
And yet,
Your eyes,
Your smile,
Your lips against mine,
How can I resist?

You're the only thought to cross my mind,
My only dream at night,
Am I wasting my time on useless hopes,
Should I just give it up?

You're everything i've ever dreamed of,
Plus a little bit more,
And yet I can't help feel as if,
I can't compare,
To your eyes,
Your smile,
Your lips against mine.

How can I let you go?

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  • xirshilittleperrax
    August 21, 2007

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    WOW!!!

    hAY I RELLY LIKE THIS POEM AND I HAVE TO SAY U ARE VERY VERY GOOD. THIS IS RELLY GOD AND I'LL TELL SOME OF MY FRIENDS TO REAFD THIS. KEEP GOING AND ITS GOOD AND IT CIMES FROM THE HEART.