Poision
s
l
i
p
s
from
my
lips
so
s.e.d.u.c.t.i.v.e.l.y
that
you
cant
help
but
~s~w~a~l~l~o~w~
my words
[lies]
and
beg for more
[s-e-l-f
d-e-s-t-r-u-c-t-i-o-n]
as
you
drink
it
down
Author notes
I know this not a wonderful, inspiring poem. And I know, most likely it sucks and should be removed. I am entering it because your contest inspired it and if nothing else I will get some honest, even if harsh criticism. Great contest idea, it was a fun write. Good luck with the judging.
A contest entry
- I'll be your wishing star.. by Escape--.
525 points, ended March 4, 2007, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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i think this is awesome. i've missed reading your stuff. i'm back now tho. ~Aurora
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