Let me cry on a sea of sorrows
See me reign in the kingdom of regret
See us fall in the cliffs of despair
Hear me glides through the winds of confusion
Let me burn in the flames of cowardice
Smell the smoldering fate of defeat in my eyes
Witness the rapids of hope transfix into breathing tidal waves of joy,
Only to be tamed by the icy cold touch of realities artic freeze
Recalling my echo suffocate in the delinquency of the family
Watch my heart bump to the unfair rhythm of life
Flow the sands of time playfully through your hands
Eager eyes penetrate anxiety
See the thunder of self-pity entangle my lost life
Life, unfair, unjust, uncontrolled, unwanted,
Undeniable.
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Good word choice. Unfair though is what little kiddoes say when their parents won't buy them a chocolate at the grocery store.
Don't wallow in self pity. Otherwise people will get pissed off.
Lol
Nice write, sounds good.
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OMg See told you to write more its friggin awsome!!!! your sooo talented and arrgh...where do you get your ideas from...you write so well.
Becky
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