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If A Woman Only Knew

If only women knew
what was in my heart
this feeling of longing
and that's just to start

If they understood the beauty
That I see in their eyes
Or when I see them smile
I step back and take a sigh

If they knew how much I loved
Their touch that I so miss
How much I liked
A long passionate kiss

And if they like to snuggle
How I'd hold them awe so tight
If a women only knew
They might just look twice

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I hope this moves you,

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  • Sandygram
    February 26, 2007

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    So Sweet And Heartfelt

    Wow Charlie, Your sweet words could melt asny heart. It hasd mine. You write with so much love and compassion, it is truly beautiful. Makes me want to hug you my friend. We all need that feeling of closeness and miss it when we don't have it. Thank you for sharing this lovely poem. I am sure Grace's heart melted as mine did when she read it too. You take care and many blessings. Sandy


  • Inside and out
    February 25, 2007

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    Congratulations on winning the bronze trophy for this incredibly romantic and tender poem. Beautifully written. Well done dear poet.


  • Sweetangelgrace
    February 24, 2007

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    This poem is so true. i love the way the poem is described. This is a really touching poem and i really loved it.

    Verry great poem i was impressed!
    Good luck!

    ~~GRACE~~


  • honey bear
    February 24, 2007

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    thank you for entering this very sweet and gentle write , i am sure our angel will love it ,good luck in the contest


  • Lady Ireland gold member
    February 23, 2007

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    Excellent!

    You do have a lovely way with words, your lyrics are very tender and touching.
    Good luck
    Slan Dolres. xx


  • Rose Angel gold member
    February 23, 2007

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    Always Complimentary,Always So Nice!

    Think about you...and here you are thinking about all of us! We understand!It is so nice to hear he is missing our smiles,kisses, our beauty,and affection...Well..The compliments are wonderful.But you deserve many for every thing you mention about we women.It makes life worthwhile living..A splendid write here! Lovely flow to your poem, and lovely sentiment expressed..Good write..Bravo!


  • debilynn gold member
    February 23, 2007

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    a beautiful write spoken from the heart. it flows so smooth...almost like a caress. keep writing dear heart. i await more words. God bless you always>


  • gullionmar
    February 23, 2007

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    very nice

    lovely write charlie hows your book comming along have you finised it yet. check out lulu.com, they are really cheap on publishing ok

  • June-bug
    February 23, 2007

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    Beautiful write, the longing is reflected deep within your words. Perfect for this contest, Your words reflect just what the contest ask for. Great job and very gentle.

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