I lie in wait,
upon my bed,
slumber, rest, and laid ill head,
I wake to feel him rush my veins,
I want him more but still the same,
I can't resist his wings to touch,
I love his love, he's soft and plush,
he whispers gently, he cures my ills
his vibrant spirit, and his voice that stills,
I close my eyes, my lips, his bode,
brings about desire, my hands can feel,
his naked silhouette, and wonderous build,
to dine and feast,
I'll take the risk,
and when he speaks,
I'll breath him in,
let his words absorb my skin,
in light and passion,
as we begin,
the fairest of fairest,
the sweet that's brisk,
I long the moment,
of his full pledge kiss,
I find Divine,
so right, secure,
the echo tastiness for the right for more,
to burn in passion,
the scape is not,
to be held in his arms,
that is all that I got,
I'll take the embroiderer,
for it's his love that I sought...
A contest entry
- angels by dream5111.
300 points, ended February 23, 2007, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - In the Arms of an Angel by Paloszoo.
700 points, ended February 3, 22 entries
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This is very lovely and full of passion. The only thing I would say is that it's riddled with spelling errors, but if you clean it up, it'll be superb! Thanks for entering my contest. I'm honored to have you show your work here.
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its fixed read it again if you like
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your really good wrighter
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very good! and, best of luck in the contest
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thankx for the notice i have not been around in awhile i rememeber that :
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WOW beautiful and tastefully sensual so far my friend. Please do finish writing it as I am left with wanting to read more.
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"let his words asborb my skin,
in light and passion," is my favorite part im intrested to as to what happens next so let me no when you right it -
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you can reaD IT NOE\W AGAIN IF YOU LIKE
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i wasn't done writing it i had to go. so i will probably finish it later.. thanx for repolying. i enjoy writning on the site and reading as well
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