Watching by the window of my heart
Looking for the angel if she just passed
Tho' it's sunny and glowing all the while
The gloom of my heart does'nt let me smile
Oh! angel So do let me shine in your grace
Carry me in your arms away from this place
I'll wipe away your pains, all your tears
So if you felt lonely, do feel my caress
Comforting you and me alike and my soul
Lets love like love has never been known
With every kiss I ll engrave my care
With every move turning you bare
Still making love not out of passion
To reveal you the truth of my affection
Come my grace, my angel my dear
From Heaven if so I'd bring you your cheer...
Sunny-
Author notes
For Sunny's Grace...
A contest entry
- our angel needs romancing! by honey bear.
550 points, ended February 24, 2007, 5 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Sunny star,
This poem was so good it touched me in some many ways! I have always wanted to lay beneath the stars with my one and only.
This really touches my heaRT AND GOOD LUCK!
¨¨grace~~ -
thank you for entering this beautiful write, you must get out of the habit of putting your name on the poems as contests are mostly judged blind, you are also not a single man any more my love as you are engaged to be married now so do not qualify to win our angels heart but this is still a very beautiful write, thank you for entering and as you were still free when you wrote this then i shall leave it in the contest
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that is a beautiful write for a friend.... well done
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i love reading your poems like this, they just make me smile with i don't feel like it sometimes, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest
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