Fuck me
Hurt me
Just don't
Convert me
Rape me
Take me
Just don't
Forsake me
If you taste the darkness
Then you'll never be the same
Once it gets inside you
You only have yourself to blame
Spank me
Teach me
Just don't
Preach to me
Break me
Bind me
Just don't
Remind me
The darker the better
There is no turning back
The hotter the wetter
Until your soul burns black
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I dont know where this came from, I just dont want to turn into everything that has happened to me...
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Oh my gosh, I love this poem too. You are a really good writer! "If you taste the darkness
Then you'll never be the same
Once it gets inside you
You only have yourself to blame" That's my favorite stanza. I'm going through that same thing right now... Excellent poem!
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This is really good, even though you don't know where this came from it still felt like it came from your heart, You are a really good writter.
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This is truly dark, powerful. I love how you said Rape me
Take me
Just don't
Forsake me-- this last one I really like. The don't convert me, forsake me, remind me- it all made for a brilliant work. Great job.
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well where did this come from i hope that this part
Fuck me
Hurt me
Just don't
Convert me
Rape me
Take me
Just don't
Forsake me
never happened to you but still a good write
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What a poem indeed.you liked to be physically harmed, neverthless reminding that something you do not like to forsake.I wonder you have offered such sweet comments on my poem.It indicates that there are sweet springs inside of you, that you only suppress my dear sweet little sister.Allow them to come out, then you will submerge the world with all swetness...Venu
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