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Journey

I sat behind the wheel and I began to ponder
Thoughts and ideas my mind began to wander

Where was I headed where would I go
Who would I meet what will I know

I can't live in this beamless hole

Somewhere along the line I lost control

 

The doors on this journey rapidly closing

The darkness of reality quickly foreclosing

 

Waking up becomes a constant chore

Yet i constantly pick myself up off hells floor

 

I hang with friends to pass the time

Failure a constant reminder a ringing chime

 

This feeling nags like a broken bone

Walking these streets like some drone

 

Someday I vow this feeling will pass

When I become number one in my class

 

I have feeling and alot of heart

Thats just what I need to get my start

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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  • Child of an Angel
    March 17, 2007
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    dabbing huh?

    lol This is good, like REAL good. I mean wowza. You did amazingly with this piece Dave. Great job, I am perturbed you even tried to make me think you sucked lol damn you. I know where you are going, but Jon is driving