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Bleh

It is a darkness that moves over me
Blocking the light from what I see
She is to far away from here
I still see her, I can't be free

There are amazing sight near
Beautiful is Amalia's face, quite clear
Still I see a small child far away
Sometimes it is so hard to raise a cheer

My happiness wanes every night
Who is there to take away my fright?
It is to late to talk, to late to think
Shadows flitter across my light

I do love this tiny Queen
She is in my mind when others are mean
This is a terrible poem
While Kat is invading my dreams

I feel so depressed right now
I couldn't tell you why or how
No one can talke to me right here
Everyone is always leaving, Wow!

That sound truly pathetic and weak
I have always been a little meek
All the people I love are leaving
I feel so depressed right now

Now it is time to sleep
My promises I must keep
I will be better in the morning
Amalia, Caiti, Kat, Megan, Rion I will see you in my dreams

Author notes

It sucks, I don't feel like trying, but I felt like righting, I just get tired of waking up every morning and being me. Someitmes I just wish I could control everything. Then maybe life would be easy. I imagine this is just a bad mood that will pass by tomorrow, it really is pathetic and we won't even go into the rest of my life. Good night!

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  • bleed-it-out
    March 2, 2007

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    !!!

    i get tired of being me but im pretty sure if we were someone else we would get tired of being them its a never ending cycle...im a control freak but i really honestly have no control over my life 95% of the time. hopefully this mood your going through will pass u have wonderful writting skills keep them up there deep there real they are just wonderful!!!


  • Luthien Luinwe
    February 28, 2007
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    Ah please dont' be sad. I promise that I'll do everything in my power not to leave you! Besides do you honestly think I could go without seeing you for weeks upon end? NO!! I love you hun, so please don't be sad. Tis a good poem, just dripping with emotion.