brow to brow
trickles a conversation,
of silver threads
hemming a thirst
on our passion's voids...
shh...don't wipe
with futile words,
let a thousand pores sing.
celebrate and whirl with me
in this drunken madness...
Please tell me what you think
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Lovely work...the picture says alot with the words...nicely done, thanks for sharing
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Beautiful metaphores, superb flow.. just an outstanding piece that captures the heart and thrills the mind.. debby
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What can I say - I identified with this wholly. So quiet, yet bursting with Expression. -
a very well written small poem
and very creative... this writer created a wealth of wwriter's choices with the metaphor to void and open pores
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Some moemtns have no need for voices or words, love the ending of it..in this drunken madness...drunk on love and passion. Awesome.
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