The silkness of your skin,
Slides along my finger tips.
My hand layed tenderly on your face.
So rough,and yet so loving.
I feel your palm on the back of my neck
It is cold yet pleasing.
You pull me close,
And i feel the unbeating of your heart on my chest.
Your lips meet mine,
I become yours.
I feel your hand move down to my back,
And your lips to my neck.
The prick on my neck lets me know,
That i am your first nights victim.
My blood trickles down my neck.
It is cold as it drys.
Igrow limp in your arms.
You lay me down as my
Breathe quivers at the last.
Author notes
i turned this poem in to a profeser at a college to read as my best for that day, of what i thought was my best....im glad i did becouse he liked it and was suprized when read it
on the back of that page he wrote "You have unquestionable talent in poetry...."
i didnt really want to go to the conference but now im glad i did
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Finally another vampire lover
yes i actully have a couple vampire poems myself check out my site and check it out. i love this poem thanxs .
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wow
this is so powerful yet so good. i could not stop reading it. i had to get off the computer and i got yelled at because i was still reading. it is really interesting and definately fits the subject of the group that you are in. just dont take that in a bad way but getting to the point this is a very good poem and i like it a lot. thank you for sharing it! good write!
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cool
this was a cool, sick and bloody poem i loved it i love these kinds of poems i hope you had just as much fun wrighting this as i did reading this poem it was very juicy keep the good work up and i will be reading more of your wonderful poems thankd for sharing and God Bless Sign: Di.
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its so good. so... real. so sexy... i love it. it really expresses the want and need, the dark lust of a vampire. good jod, its perfect.
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It is indeed a beautiful write.
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Breath taking
I loved your poem! You'll be of great use in our clan!! -Alastor
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