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Wings

Her wings set out,
Her hair blows in the wind.
She maintains her speed in air.
The last of her was only a tear,
Of blood lying on the ground.

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  • serenity silvermoon gold member
    March 23, 2007
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    great poem

    this was very sad sister you are an angel and we all love you aand just like mark wills says in his song dont laugh at be he says we all will have beautiful wings someday and that is true thanks for sharing and God bless love your sister dianna


  • golden falcon
    March 23, 2007
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    wonderfull love this its cool


  • Dante DrakenSire
    March 6, 2007
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    Short and sorrowful, I loved it.

    -Alastor