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Stairs(Counting)

1,2,3
I count my way down
4,5,6
Where am I
7,8,9
Am I dead
10,11,12
Or simply lost?
13,14,15
I think I skipped a step
15,16,17
Did I count that twice?
18,19,20
Is anyone here
21,22,23
This is perpostrious
24,25,26
Surely I am not the only one
27,28,29
Though it seems that I am
30,31,32
What was that?!
33,34,35
It was nothing
36,37,38
Just my mind playing tricks on me
39,40,41
Then why is my heart
42,43,44
Beating so fast
45,46,47
There must be thousands
48,49,50
Is someone running?
51,52,53
Is it, getting louder
54,55,56
Be still my heart
57,58,59,
Just a mind...*shuffle*
60,61,62
looking up,nothing
63,64,65
looking down,nothing
66,67,68
Concentrate on counting
69,70...
Laughing,distinctive laughing
running,stealthy running
smiling,sinisterly smiling
Falling,distinctive falling
1,2,3
I count my way down

Well arent I a genius? lol

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  • cutiepie1
    June 2, 2007
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    iv liket his poem...it getys people wondering


  • -Ink Artist-
    February 25, 2007

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    Interesting direction to take this image! Very emotive and compelling vision this gave you. The fear plays out in your words well. Thanks for your entry and good luck!

    ~Lori


  • XHollowXEyesX
    February 22, 2007
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    wow, absolutely love this. i think its the style that grabs me the most.
    goodluck in the contest