Come to me my lover
I have been too long without you
I ache for the music your touch
makes my body dance to
Your instrument striking
every cord of my womanhood
Creating an aria of seductive
velvet succulence
Filling my senses with sultry bravura
I follow your lead
as you take me to heights
of uninhibited tempos
Arching my body
to meet every thrust
As we reach a crescendo
Neither one missing a beat
of our sexual concerto
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Arching mybody..to meet every thrust. I lke the imagery her of sex being music that excites each others rythms.
Question? are your poems real or fantasy? I enjoy how you describe what sesxcan be..i love the touching part and kissing too.
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Arching my body to meet evetry thrust! wow! I wish I were your lover..You wrote a very sensual poem!
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I thought that this was stunning. It took me away. Lovemaking at it's most beautiful. I like the metephor, comparing lovemaking to music, for really, if you think about it, it is, just like music. Caught in the moment. Wonderful piece of writing.
Well done for this
With
Dark
Love
Wayne Leon
x
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hmm.. a good analogy of making love... like a sexaul concerto. There is no right way top feel intimate but
using such imagination makes it more exciting!
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oh yeah!
could've danced all night! great write!
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Bravo
Encore, encore!
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woah hun this was awsome
it was very different and unique
and yet beautifully done
loved it
well done and best of luck
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Being a musician, this struck volumes with me, no doubt. The symmetry of it and it's crescendo at the end was very moving.
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Wow this is wonderfull! very sensual and erotic! Love it
Gaylene
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this is one hot piece and I loved it, thank you for something nice and hot to read.
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omg i hope the pics not of you lolol this is amazing love wow xxx
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HOT!!!
This is very lovely. It's sultry and sexy... not to mention sensual. Every line is a concerto within itself. Great job!
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Beautiful Concerto Of Love
Hi Soulful Woman, You poem sings full of sensuality and a beatiful concerto of love is heard in every stanza. Bravo!!! A standing ovation for your masterpiece. What a lovely poem to read this morning. It does make me miss and long for the touch of the love deep in my heart.
Take care
Sandy
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Now this is one song I would love to have a partner to dance with to...What a beautiful dance of sensuality, intimacy, longing and passion you have created here...OK...why is this NOT in a contest?? Get going woman! This is sooo deserving of a shiney thing...Bravo! yet another great write from my kindred spirit~~
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What a beautiful concerto !!
As we reach a crescendo
Neither one missing a beat
of our sexual concerto
Thank you so much for sharing
Keep up the good work
Gloria
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And oh what a beautiful concerto it is when lovers clash in the heat of each other's passion. Guided by their deep seated ache that only an encounter this poem entices.
Beautifully romantic in all its tasteful sensuality. Being a bass player myself I love the musical references throughout this delightful candlelight dinner of passionate desires. MMMM YES!
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HEATING UP THINGS
This is just great and very emtional(I follow your lead to heights of uninhibited tempos arching my body to meet ever thrust,,,neither one
missing a beat of our sexual concerto.EXCELLENT
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Oh geez, nuther one of your sultry writes...whatever is the Universe thinking it is doing holding out on you?
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Wow! This is more like it! Brilliant, luscious, tantalizing, stimulating, all the good adjectives. You were thinking about me when you penned this were you not?
Amera
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Sensual and lightly erotic..not enough so as to be gross though. I like the art and bg too.
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I love the counterpoint in this. Bravo! Encore! Made my hear beat doubletime. Three bunnies for you.
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OMG!, I want to make some music. This was lovely.
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