During the timeless hours,
sitting upon heavens towers,
as she watches over you,
and all that you do.
Though the angel you may not see,
she is as real as the sea.
The silent touch of her grace,
your heart she shall embrace,
the gentle breeze of angel wings.
and in the air a whisper sings.
In the scent of a rose
and in all that grows.
Just for a moment,
then suddenly went,
I heard a peaceful tune,
but was gone to soon.
During the timeless hours
she sits upon heavens towers.
She sits, she shines a light on you,
to embrace, to guide you,
though the light you may not see,
but as real as a blossom tree.
If tears of gloom are wept
in an angels hand they are kept.
During the timeless hours,
she sits upon heavens towers,
as she watches over you,
guiding us through all we do.
An angel, heavens tender delights
during all the days, during all the nights.
Author notes
contest option - Angels
"Writing is my passion"
A contest entry
- angels by dream5111.
300 points, ended February 23, 2007, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - picture inspired by serenity silvermoon.
600 points, ended April 26, 2007, 9 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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It's overall very good. I like the theme and content of the poem. However one or two of the rhymes seem forced. Thank you for entering and good luck!
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Thank you for entering, I quite like this, my favourite lines being:
If tears of gloom are wept
In an angels hand they are kept
Very good, thank you for entering and good luck x
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This is a very good poem and very descriptive...
that was a really lovely words to say about your Angel.... keep up the good work and good luck in my contest!
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Excellent
You have penned a piece filled with eloquence and grace. Just simply beautiful! If this contest has been judged...I would simply put it in another. Your penning just whispers to the reader as we read through and I love It
My pleasure as always to read! ~Tia
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This poem is really nice. I like the third stanza the most. It really stood out to me. Great work with the whole thing and excellent imagery!
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I love this poem. It is such a beautiful image and has such a peaceful feeling to it. Thank you so much for sharing this beautiful write.
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This is very sweet and lovely...I loved it...Keep up the good work and thank you for sharing this with us...I really enjoyed reading it
I especially liked the part.
During the timeless hours,
she sits upon heavens towers,
as she watches over you,
guiding us through all we do.
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Beautiful flow and use of words
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Just Beautiful!
This is so lovely! I love the imagery you portrayed in this of a beautiful guardian angel looking out for us and loving us This was a fantastic write and so nice to see something not only positive but written so beautifully...
'If tears of gloom are wept
in an angels hand they are kept.'
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During the timeless hours,
she sits upon heavens towers,
as she watches over you,
guiding us through all we do.
An angel, heavens tender delights
during all the days, during all the nights.'
Such a lovely thought
Thankyou for sharing,
Luv Tez xxx
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i like that none of your rhymes seem forced..this is a powerfully uplifting piece, and reading it put a smile on my face and a warm little tickle in my heart. just lovely.
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oh yeah and you writing this poem could make somebody's bad day turn into a good one. Thank you for your time and effort!
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Very beautiful and so true. I love the flow and rhythym. 5 stars! *****
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Beautiful...With fantastic flow, rhyme , and imagery...I would say just perfect....In every way.
Take care....
Dusty -
'angels' and 'devils' are two sides of a counterfeit coin...
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"Though the angel you may not see,
she is as real as the sea." is my favorite part i really liked this poem -
we all have out own angel that protects us,
you poem was a delight to read good luck in the contest
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Delightful
good to know that somwone is watching over us.i hope she doesn't get lonely up there.Well done on a lovely write, Ros
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I was drawn in by the title.I like the feel and mood of this piece You have imagery to please the heart of an angel and a rhyme pattern presented with ease. when I read this it feels good as I say the words and I see within my mind the towers and the guardians atop looking down. This is a well crafted poem but I see a poem within a poem when all the shorter lines are read alone...another beautiful read. Thank you for the pleasure.
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This is a heavenly poem great job
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