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mirror girl

She smiles.
She laughs.
She frowns.
She shouts.
She cries. And cries. Because her reflection never lies.

You can kid the world
but never yourself
cause if anyone knows you
it's always gonna be you

you know what you want
you know what you don't need
you know how strong you are
you know what makes you fall

no need to pretend
take off your fashion clothes
peel away the glamour
this is who you really are


lying and hoping that the world
buys the act that your selling
try to convince yourself
everyday this is who you are
read through the script in your head
how to act, what to say

you can kid the world
but never yourself
cause if anyone knows you
it's always gonna be you

mirrors never lie
they're always gonna tell
break open your secrets, break open your secrets
mirrors never lie
they reveal the monsters
they show you the sad sad person you are

we lie
cause the truth hurts
we lie-we lie
just to be like every one else

but you know you
is this really what you want?
cause mirrors never lie-
mirrors never lie

you can kid the world
but never yourself
cause if anyone knows you
it's always gonna be you

cause mirrors never lie
mirrors never lie

She smiles.
She laughs.
She frowns.
She shouts.
She cries. And cries.

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wrote this after staring at myself in the mirror.....

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  • TheIcarus
    April 18, 2007

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    Amazing how the lines just flow. It sounds really song-like to me. You're aa amazing inspirational writer.


  • NyteShade
    March 2, 2007
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    why have i never commented on your poetry?, *hits herself* shame you on you bell lol. This poem is friggin awesome and yeah i love the description of this piece, mirror's i hate them especially the person on the other side lol she never says anything lol. great work tia keep it up.


  • dark life 1992
    February 23, 2007
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    I like this its really good

  • puffles-puppy5003
    February 23, 2007
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    Great Write

    This poem is so completely true. Everyone tries to hide somethings in their life. I might be something as simple as hiding an exboyfriend from your current boyfriend or as complicated as hiding a major part of your past from the one person you want to be your future.


  • XFaLLen-StarX
    February 23, 2007

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    "we lie
    cause the truth hurts
    we lie-we lie
    just to be like every one else"

    the truth does hurt sometimes .. but we never have to be like anyone else .. even if the truth hurts, face it nd deal with it, coz non of us is perfect, we all hv issues nd all we need is to hv a high self-esteem that no one can brings us down ..

    i like how u started it nd end it with the same verse.. i like the chorus too! actually its all goody !!

    gr8 piece!!


    me
    xxx

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