.You'll taste like sin tonight.
[[you'll taste like me tonight]]
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I can padlock my belt buckle but baby;;
[your finger's the key]
These bathroom stall quickies are starting to
keep me awake at night &&
your taste is seeping through my veins.
Sex me up, light me up `cause
[I'm better than any drug]
Smoke me up, l.i.c.k me up
&& I'll let you taste my (rainbow)
I'll be your pretty little whore;;
my collarbones decorated with your teeth marks
&& polished hickeys
and darling, just r/i/p my skirt till
I'm [screaming] incoherent confessions
&& not-so-secret desires
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.
.
[`cause sweetie, nothing compares to this
feeling between my legs]
Author notes
Atelophobia--x
"Naked Peekaboo"
In a list
A contest entry
- && dir.r.ty.pretty.girls by Crash Into Me.
735 points, ended March 9, 2007, 15 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Public Places && Tangled Bed Sheets by bird-mad girl.
1200 points, ended May 19, 2007, 20 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - ~*~All Your Dirty Pretty Comes Here~*~ by xxRainbowDawnxx.
625 points, ended December 30, 2008, 58 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - {11:11}♥[[Wish For Sex && Asphyxiation]] by PaiigeBARBIE.
440 points, ended September 2, 2007, 5 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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this is amazing!!
god, i loved the whole thing!!
&&finalist without a DOUBT!
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aww thanks! :]] <33
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Oh wow, I love this! It is incredible, and beautiful. This is by far one of the best poems I have read in a while; great job!
[good.job&thanks.for.entering]
x.
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Beautiful darling. I can relate to this feeling myself. Everything being just a rushed jobbie and all you gotta do is push the right buttons, press in the right code digits and I'm yours - then I'm uttering things I just love to utter, truthful or not they are what THEY want to hear. It's beautiful, enjoyed this one greatly! Thanks for the entry.
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oh my bby
HOT
this is my fav erotica dirty pretty..
fantastic honney\\\IFLY
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hands down, pants down, this was amazing. Its deff one of my favorites. completely just wow. so fucking delicious. Your descriptions where like a sugary toxin and I could eat them all day long under a hot pink lemonade sky. It reminds me of the music video butterfly by crazy town. yeah. so tempting.
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Sex me up, light me up `cause
[I'm better than any drug]
Smoke me up, l.i.c.k me up
&& I'll let you taste my (rainbow)
love itt<3333 -
your fucking delicious
and addicting..
and sexy...
and beautiful
and ALL mine.
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ooooo!
i love this so much!
very....
hmmm dont know the word but i LOVE this part!
Sex me up, light me up `cause
[I'm better than any drug]
Smoke me up, l.i.c.k me up
&& I'll let you taste my (rainbowww)
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you may think it sucked.
but i loveed it !!
you really are an amazing writer
even when you not trying
ya. im jealous.
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mmmh mmmmmh mmmmmh
baby dollie wifey
i love you.
this was it.. it might be the one
because i definitely know you are..
god damn... cold showers dont help me anymore..
this was fucking amazing!!
i love you
♥
-alexsis
your yummy.
dont delete it.
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wow.
this is hands down absolutely fucking amazing.
♥
wonderful job.
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"I can padlock my belt buckle but baby;;
[your finger's the key]"
Loveit.LoveLoveLove.
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I can padlock my belt buckle but baby;;
[your finger's the key]
nice
I love the layout and hte colors of this on hte page as well,
good job sweetie
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i think this is good. it does feel a bit rushed. but the general idea is great!
the lines you talked about with ur friend are good in this poem.
once again i love it. vegan peanut butter cookies to you. -
<33 this was amazing
"I can padlock my belt buckle but baby;;
[your finger's the key]
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&& your ending as well<333 -
Keep it.
Mhmm.
but I must say this is a bit;;
Orgasmic would be the world? [pun intended I suppose]
"and darling, just r/i/p my skirt till
I'm [screaming] incoherent confessions
&& not-so-secret desires
.
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[`cause sweetie, nothing compares to this
feeling between my legs]"
wonderfull
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ooh, you do????
*blushes* *passes out*
"I can padlock my belt buckle but baby;;
[your finger's the key]
"
"and darling, just r/i/p my skirt till
I'm [screaming] incoherent confessions
&& not-so-secret desires"
you're sexy.
[lets relive our honeymoon.]
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This is wonderful dollface.
I really REALLY like it
I'm bookmarking it <33
Love you soo much!
~Princess of Shadows~ -
Love NIN, gotta say that (in my picture I'm wearing a NIN hoodie actually
)
"Sex me up, light me up `cause
[I'm better than any drug]"
--speaking of NIN ... "The Perfect Drug" goes well with this, I suppose
these are my favourite lines. I don't see why the touch of someone inside you can't be considered a drug.
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