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Blood Lust

Missing image

Soul  

imitates life

Blood with wet lips

Darkness enters life

Time enters echoing chamber

Awakening vengeful distorted waves

Every drop of essence – wanting

Dancing gracefully

- blood –

Removed clarity

Souls of myriads and myriads

Blood soaked gown flowing

Unquenchable thirst

Immortal being

nature imitates

Sleep immortal

Fluid life

Soul.

Author notes

 

Palindrome Poetry

Also Known as Mirrored Poetry

A palindrome, by definition, is a word, phrase, verse, sentence, or even poem that reads the same forward or backward.  It stems from the Greek word palindromos: palin, meaning again, and dromos, meaning a running. Combining the two together, the Greek meaning gives us, running back again...

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  • Knight70 silver member
    June 3

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    Congratulations on a silver!

    This is inspiring. I have so much of form poetry that I want to learn. This palindrome is deadly delicious. Beautifully written. Your author notes are greatly appreciated, as I am not well versed in form poetry yet.


  • pranj
    May 6

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    WOW!

    Highly intriguing write! Two different poems, thats brilliant! Maybe more than just brilliant but then my vocabulary has become lame to to tell you how great your write is.


  • Starhiker
    December 14, 2007

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    Two poems in one,

    one poem farward, a completely different poem reading backwards. Nice twist on the palindrome. I like the subject of vampires, so this hit the spot, so to speak. To make it truely palindrome, you should mirror it underneath the first, as a second stanza, for those missing the point of it being palindrome. Very good poem, deserves my applause! Jim


  • Desire gold member
    May 30, 2007

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    Wow!

    Now this is one Awesome piece
    Loved the Palindrome but then I Love each piece You have penned (should I just say Ditto)
    Form Queen
    Powerful images that raise the hairs
    but need that every now and then

    Congratulations on Your Trophy win!!
    You are tooooooooooo cool

    Many blessings to You!
    Best wishes too
    and much love~ Desire~*~


  • Sock
    May 9, 2007
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    creative. i enjoyed it.


  • Jimfre Talbent
    April 15, 2007

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    I am not sure if I like this more forward or backward! The hardest part was reading it smoothly in the reverse. . .so I typed it out backwards to read it. I wanted to give it the fair read it deserves.

    No sense in giving up on a piece because you need to work at it to understand all of it.

    In either reading event, you certainly painted a picture that was vivid and fabulous.

    Dark (but not morbid), deep, and sensuous.


  • Myth Of Twilight
    February 23, 2007
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    deep with darkniss i love this poem it riminds of a vamipersway


    • Amera gold member
      February 23, 2007
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      Thanks, did you like it frontward or backward better?


  • PerVirtuous
    February 23, 2007

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    Awwww. You figured out my secret! No matter. You are under a deep spell and can never break free. Once bitten, you bend to my will.. and the will of these three undead bunnies.


  • blood tourniquet
    February 23, 2007

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    *Licks lips*

    Wohoow, this poem is G.R.E.A.T! This is a very expressive way to write a poem. Sometimes you just used two words wherewith you painted a whole, passionate story.
    You really left me speecheless!

    Thank you so much for entering and good luck!
    Blessed Be

    • Amera gold member
      February 23, 2007
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      Wow! Thanks, this is the first time I have written in palindrome. Perfect contest for it; I think the poem flows better when read backwards.

  • Black Swan Rose
    February 22, 2007
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    passionate , it flows seductively well... I dare say that I like it... a lot

    J


  • Soulful Woman silver member
    February 22, 2007
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    I finally got here...This was an awesome piece. Not the genre that I write but you do have your own style like most of us do. Very dark, I havent tried that style yet..I might just venture into it..
    Soulful Woman


  • February 22, 2007
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    You are amazing...

    Princess, you are amazing... This is a wonderful poem. It is tight in its construction. Built of the foundation of the soul. This is full of darkness... the poem completes the circle and is fantastic! Bravo!


  • Im3
    February 22, 2007

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    You possess so many skills with the ability to transcend all the styles you pen. I loved this alot. I leaves me with a fulfilled feeling of a journey's goal met. The clandestine view completes your work with depth and richness. Save the soul who cant stand your darkess

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