From beneath blood red moon it rose
Born of ancient death's seed
with not thought, only desire
it rose to power in the night
and those of the undead kneeled
fear in thier immortal souls
those who worshiped the blood cringed.
Something new had arisen
from beyond darks night.
"Fang and claw coward
seeded with bastards blood
rue my dark nights flood
reap the reward
of unholy seed sown
Lay before your master
puppy bellies soft, fat, and exposed."
"Let the blood god bleed you
like
crimson
from
the
rose."
B.L.House ©2003
A contest entry
- Vampires and Blood! by okadadokie.
500 points, ended February 23, 2007, 21 entries
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That was very intense and I loved the end, the imagery was great,"bleed you like crimson from the rose." so artfully beautiful. I am a Buffy fan so I love all things vampire!
Blessed Be!
Azlyn
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Dark and Delicious!!!
Wow Bryan, This was an amazing poem with dark and powerful imagery that brings the reader into the dark night. It was a pleasure to read. Great Weite!!! Best of luck in the contest.
Take care
Sandy
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A very true and original vampire poem. Blood and roses, there's nothing quite as beautiful. Great job. Good luck.
~Oka
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cool, i like it alot. good luck in the contest.
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Totally cool dark poem! Loved every line! Very well done, sweetie; wish you all the best in the contest!
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