I just can't seem to help
this pleasing little hobby
I mean it
I just can't stop
I think it may be
Some planted madness
Deep within my shadowed heart
And I like it
I like it
I mean I really really like it
It may be because red is my favorite color
I may be that I have no sense of smell
It may be because I'm just that lonley
But when I see them I merely think
"What the hell?"
I love the gurgly gasps they make
When the blade runs over their throat
That cool slide of metal
Covered in hot gore
Yeah
It's a petty addiction
I just can't seem to live without
Seeing that little leftover reminder
Sitting in the boxes and jars on my shelf
Part of one of those pretty bones
That I snatch as I peel back
All that pretty pale flesh and muscle
Don't ask what that shade is on my wall
Speaking of
Have you ever tasted blood before?
It's a little hard not to
When you cut into their living arteries
But when they won't let you kill them in peace
You just have to find a way to keep them quiet and still
The screaming gives me pleasant chills
But the fear in their half-dead eyes
Gives me another kind of happiness
Every time
Every time I see a little frail neck
Every time I see a pretty collar bone
Every time I see that fleeting pulse line
I feel the urge
My obsession
My Addiction
My Obsessive Compulsiveness
My Play Time
Author notes
umm . . . I have a weird . . . mind complex.
A contest entry
- I WANT GORE!!! (enter quick!) by vampire of thought.
700 points, ended February 24, 2007, 8 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Dark, Demented, why not!?!! by wanderingstarlet.
432 points, ended April 17, 2007, 28 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Hahaha, I totally thought I would hate this, but it's actually really entertaining. I like the way it's sort of all-together like these acts make you so excited and hyper you're just running it all together.
I love these lines:
"Every time
Every time I see a little frail neck
Every time I see a pretty collar bone
Every time I see that fleeting pulse line"
Good job.
-Allura
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this was good. it was twisted, cuz i'm sure there ARE people like that somewhere... but you just don't normally hear about it cuz its' too "gory" anywayz, thanx for entering! wicked schweet
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YES!!!!
I LOVE THIS ONE!! And NICE method of death!!! THIS IS A GREAT PEACE AND I LOVE THE DESCRIPTIONS!! THIS IS THE FUCKIN SHIT!! KUDOS
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*Applause*
so far, you are the first to get it.
I LOVED IT! It had more gore than the others so far. I like the blood and the description and the fact that you are telling it from your mind, (or at least the character is.)
IT was awesome, a little frazzled at times, but still, awesome.
thanks for entering, and good luck!
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