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Internal Imperfections Illicit

As I adore, admire, and aspire to acquire all affection attainable about an anthropological amazement
My magnificent man may manipulate me, maybe manifests more manly motivations
Occasions often, our opulent operation only over-rules offers of obtaining honor
Doubtless my deep down, docked in dirt disposition decodes the dilemma directly,
"Love loves a lover like you love your love, my love, so lovin's loath loveless."
Women wonder wantonly while wimpering wistful whispers, wandering within walled woe
Even especially entertaining engagements eliminate ever exhausting elements erroneously
Temporary tips toward temperance, taken together, total tiny time today
But believe better boasts because belovèd beau's banter bears bluntness.

Author notes

Wrote this one about the ideal type girlfriend's sex life.

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  • Violent Messiah
    February 27, 2007
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    Interesting. Great alliteration.


  • wave picture frame
    February 26, 2007
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    wow the alliteration here is amazingly clever and there are so many sexual words here to give the game away alone without the author notes. very well written! i loved it, it's full of nice energy. peace friend, keep it up! -wave x


  • Myjoy gold member
    February 26, 2007

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    I like it. Ah It's a little hard to see the sex life part but as I read more I started to get it. It's a little hard but maybe thats what your sex life is. Well done, great write.


  • D A Hunter
    February 22, 2007

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    I like it

    I wasn't sure about the sex life bit until you told me but I had a hunch. But this is a good write, I've always been a fan of alliteration. Keep that pen to paper.