I love the way you look at me
your eyes so bright and blue
i love the way you kiss me
your lips so soft and smooth
i love the way you make me so happy
and the way you show you care
i love the way you say "i love you"
and the way youre always there
i love the way you touch me
always sending chills down my spine
i love that you are with me
and glad that you are mine
Please tell me what you think
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I thought that this was very cute and charming. I've enjoyed looking at your poem. Keep up the great job. Send me a link to a poem if you'd like me to read more.
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Very simple, short and beautiful. It's written on such an understanding language and you have found the right words. Good job.
Keep writing and God Bless -
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that was xc...i mean i didnt see anythig here!LoL my fav parts:i love the way you touch me
always sending chills down my spine
i love that you are with me
and glad that you are mine
I can relate with my bf Adam and I was hoping to find a poem that i could do that with. The title is a catchy one and it definatley drew me in
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Such beautiful words my friend for someone so close to you~~~Like a soft whisper on the wind the way you say I Love You
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beautiful
Awww, this is a wonderful poem. I feel the same way about my boyfriend, my fiance now. Great job! -
nice try
it reminds me a little bit of that poem julia stiles read in the movie"10 things i hate about you" but that one was using " i hate the way" instead of "i love the way" abart from that i really liked it
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i think ive read this before but its good none the less
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wonderful and beautiful
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welldone
This is good but a bit hard to read my be if it was in the center it would help. Sorry it might just be my eyes
but a good poem anyway.
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