I'm standing here at your front door
My arms and knees are on the floor
I'm crying here, Will you let me in?
Trying to forgive what I did
And if the past doesn't let me in
I will knock, Scream, Cry out loud
I will hurt, Fight, Stand around
For you to open your soul, To let me in
I'm off the edge, hanging here
And if the world doesn't see, I don't care
Sanity has haunt my life, If my fingers
Crumble there goes my life
Catch me, I'm falling for you
Hate me, I'll still love you
I'll be the one to hold you when your falling
I'm standing here at your front door
My arms and knees are on the floor
Take this heart, I do not care
Forgive me, For loving you
Forgive me, that will do
For if I die, I never will stop(pause)
Loving you
I'm off the edge, hanging here
And if the world doesn't see, I don't care
Sanity has haunt my life, If my fingers
Crumble there goes my life
Catch me, I'm falling for you
Hate me, I'll still love you
I'll be the one to hold you when your falling
I'm standing here at your front door
My arms and knees are on the floor
I'll hold you tight, Be your light
And if the moon doesn't shine I'll never let go...
For my love knows no bounds, In loving you
Just open you heart, let me show you
I'll be the one to hold you when your falling
Just say "I love you"
A contest entry
- Song/Lyric Writer's Contest by Acronym.
850 points, ended March 9, 2007, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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As soon as i got to the second stanza i thought song! It would make a great song. I would be wondering if i could use a line or 2 as inspiration for my own poetry
It shall be given due credit.
I'm off the edge, hanging here
And if the world doesn't see, I don't care
Sanity has haunt my life, If my fingers
Crumble there goes my life
Favourite stanza! The imagery is so vivid, i can see you clinging on but not at the same time. So good! Love it all!
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Nice
This could very easly be a song!
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Awesome!!!!!!
OMG this is wonderful! I will def be looking to read more of ur work
Ephiphany
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I can definately relate on so many levels and this is very heartwrenching as well. You had very strong and powerful words put in this which helped, I would think. over all this is one of the best I've seen so far.
"Catch me, I'm falling for you
Hate me, I'll still love you
I'll be the one to hold you when your falling
I'm standing here at your front door
My arms and knees are on the floor
Take this heart, I do not care
Forgive me, For loving you
Forgive me, that will do
For if I die, I never will stop(pause)
Loving you"
I really liked that part, can actually see this being sung.
great write and good luck in the contest
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Are you at my door? lol jk. *Glomps* I love you.
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this is one of the best poems i've read in a long time. again, i love what you do with emotion; and i definitely know how this feels.
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Thank you so much,, I made that one while listen to music so it is both a poem and a lyric....
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yeah, i can definitely see that as a song. you should record it (if you have a tune for it).
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